My Endeavors Leap to a Surge

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             My endeavors leap to a surge

 

My soul’s with Divinity blest, well-knit and strong,

From cavern I’ll soar and pipe my melodious song,

Tearing thru the numbness of stillness to the flare,

I’ll balm the grieving heart and many a Satin dare!

 

Earned comforts bestrew my path, nay by chance,

Silver to flashing gold, scintilla glow up and dance,

And will illumine the benighted path, lying before,

I’ve picked up the lost ends, pearls to dot my shore.

 

I shalt shape my fate and fashion it with pious will,

My hopes abound, my endeavors surge with thrill,

I’ve accursed the curse and nevertheless fate too,

With the throb of emboldened heart, I’ll walk true.

 

Amid the throng, I shall be towering beyond hoax,

My soul stands naked with truth, envy for the folk,

I’ve ditched caverns, sky remains my frontier to fly,

My odyssey, my sojourn, applaud me whereto I eye.

 My dear son,

I had a cursory look at your poesy diction yet I have discovered a mystery in between the lines which is melancholic, pessimistic, demoralizing and defective. The quality of life is defined by hard work, devotion, perseverance, truthfulness and candidness. No hypocrisy can outdo the abovementioned traits. I hope you shall discard and cast off the satanic stratagem which is a drag on you. Wish you the best, with my sincerest blessings. (Riaz Ahmad)


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